在BEC商務(wù)英語寫作中，很多人對作文有緊張的情緒，一方面平時的英語考試中作文就不是那么擅長，另一方面商務(wù)英語作文的專業(yè)性更強。我們在吸收商務(wù)英語知識的時候作文也是讓我們靈活運用，下面就是商務(wù)英語寫作感謝信的范文。

　　You are the president of a local university and your personal assistant has just written a short letter to you. The contracted company has just offered a lecture for your students and they would also offer some opportunities.

　　Look at the information below, reply the letter.

　　以下是校長的助理寫給校長的一封反映近期舉行的一個研討會的信件,然后校長根據(jù)信件回復(fù)舉辦方以示感謝.

　　Dear president,

　　I would like to inform you that one of our contracted company held a successful seminar in our university last Tuesday March 16th in which the CFO delivered a speech on Business Management and responded to various questions raised by our students. In addition , they offered free-charge materials on Business administration and accounting , which would be valuable to enhance the knowledge and ability of our students to handle real-life problems and the questions they would meet in the foreseeable working environment.

　　According to the terms in the new agreement, they will provide internship and short-term jobs for students majoring in Finance and Business Management , which is due to take place in June every year.

　　要點分析+思路點拔

　　確定任務(wù) 這是一填寫給簽約合作公司的感謝信,結(jié)構(gòu)為表達感謝, 贊美對方的幫助,聯(lián)絡(luò)感情,提出進一步合作的申請,詢問相關(guān)事宜.

　　寫作要點:首句要表明信件為信類型,使用商務(wù)標準用語并表述出對方給予的幫助.第二段詳細表述出對方提供的幫助所帶來的成效.第三.四段分別詢問對方對參加實習學生的要求, 并提出希望接納更多其他專業(yè)學生的申請.

　　寫作詞匯

　　Concerning 關(guān)于

　　In regard to 關(guān)于

　　With reference to 關(guān)于

　　Programme n.項目

　　Seminar n.研討會

　　Session n.研討會

　　Express v.表達 Extend v.表達

　　Sincere thanks 衷心感謝 heartfelt appreciation 衷心感謝

　　Practice v.練習 internship n.實習

　　Offer v.提供 supply , provide 提供

　　Leading company行業(yè)的領(lǐng)導(dǎo) sector 行業(yè)

　　Field n.行業(yè) high prestige n.聲譽

　　Around the world 全球的

　　Good comments,

　　Have good comments on ...

　　Have a high opinion of

　　Speak well of 好評

　　Be of great value巨大價值

　　Short-term jobs 短期工作

　　The case study案例研究

　　In addition to 另外

　　Make us informed of 通知

　　Well-known著名的

　　The eligibility of 資格

　　關(guān)鍵句型

　　I am writing to express our sincere appreciation and gratitude for your...我寫信來特別表達我們對于...真心的感激

　　I am writing to express our sincere appreciate and gratitude for your seminar in our university last Tuesday March 16th.

　　I am writing to extend our heartfelt thanks for your我寫信秋表達我對于... 由衷的感謝

　　I am writing to extend our heartfelt thanks for your help.

　　We appreciate your doing...感謝您...

　　We appreciate you offered free-charge material on Business Administration and accouting to our students.

　　We extremely appreciate 特別感謝...

　　We extremely appreciate you come here to support our activity.

　　I am writing with great gratitude for your ...我寫信來特別表達我對于...的感激

　　I am writing with great gratitude for your understanding for the delay

　　Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your 我從內(nèi)心深處對您... 表示感謝.

　　Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your support.

　　Thank you will all my heart for your 對于... 我全心全意地表示感謝

　　Thanks you will all my heart for your investment.

　　I am writing on behalf of ...to thank you for your...我代表... 寫信表示對于... 的感謝

　　I am writing on behalf of our president to thank your for your invitation.

　　表示... 促成了良好的成效

　　Contribute to ...促成了, 有助于

　　If your methods can not contributed to your greater emotional and physical healthy, it’s time to find a healthier ones.

　　Lead to ,構(gòu)成了,造成了...

　　You know , late completion lead to civil litigation .

　　Help shape 幫助塑造...

　　The school help shaped their intelligence and diligence.

　　Help foster 幫助培養(yǎng)

　　One way to help foster improve communication skills is to ask question properly

　　Help make ... More productive 幫助使得... 更高效

　　This training will make worker to produce more productive.

　　Help promote .. More fruitful幫助使得... 更有成果

　　The seminar will promote the activity more fruitful.

　　參考范文

　　Dear Mr Genera Manager,

　　Concerning the seminar you held last Tuesday, I would like to express our sincere appreciation and gratitude to the materials, internship and short-term jobs you provided for our students.

　　As the leading company in Banking sector, your company enjoys high prestige around the world, as would be expected , this seminar received good feedback among students who plan to work for big companies like yours.

　　The materials and documents you offered proved to be of great value to our university, especially the case study included, Regarding the internship and short-term jobs, please make up informed of the eligibility of the students in addition to their major, Further more, as our school of Foreign Languages also enjoys a high reputation, we would appreciate it if you could offer job opportunities in this area.

　　I would like to thank you again and look forward to further cooperation with you!

　　不知道看了上面的內(nèi)容大家有什么感想，對你有啟發(fā)就再好不過了。在商務(wù)英語考試當中，也許你會遇到難以想象的困難，但是如果你平時做好各項準備，還是要有信心去面對。滬江網(wǎng)校的商務(wù)英語課程已經(jīng)開課了，想學習的不要錯過哦!