高考備考寫作專題2 十句作文法

重點詮釋:

十句作文法是有關(guān)專家總結(jié)出來的一種高分作文方法,考生在經(jīng)過短期訓練之后便可較大幅度地提高寫作水平。其基本模式為:

1.第一段為開頭,包括兩句。第一句為主題句,點明全文主題;第二句為擴展句,進一步說明和支持主題句。兩者關(guān)系也可倒過來,由第一句說明情況,第二句點明主題。

2.第二段為正文,共七句。第三句為主題句,提出本段的主題,它應(yīng)與第一段的主題相關(guān)或一致。第四至九句為擴展句,說明和支持本段的主題。句與句之間要注意好過渡,以使段落邏輯合理,結(jié)構(gòu)得當。

3.第三段為結(jié)尾,簡化為一句,也是全文的總結(jié)句,它將前面的內(nèi)容總結(jié)為一個結(jié)果,表明自己的論點。

注意:要提高語言表達的檔次,在句式運用上就不能一味地使用簡單句和稱述句,而應(yīng)該根據(jù)實際情況靈活運用所學的各種句式。豐富的句式有助于考生在高考中出類拔萃,贏得高分。

寫作典例

電視在人們的日常生活中占有很重要的地位,電視傳播不斷深層次地影響著每一個人。請以“Television” 為題,寫一篇有關(guān)其所帶來的積極影響的英語短文。

分析:1。這篇書面表達的中心思想是電視所帶來的積極影響。2。電視對現(xiàn)代生活的影響是多方面的,考生不要試圖面面俱到,如果涉及面太多,文章反而顯得松散,我們只選擇幾個方面進行寫作,可用舉例的方法合理安排語言材料。

范文:

Television

Television presents a vivid world in front of us.1(主題句) Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. 2(擴展句)

Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.3(主題句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for people who can not go to formal university.4(擴展句) For another,children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as “The Animal World” and “The Mickey Mouse and DuckDonald”.5(擴展句) Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes.6(擴展句) Furthermore, we can learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs.7(擴展句) And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercise in some special TV training courses,8(擴展句)In short,the effect of TV’s educational role is becoming more and more obvious.9(擴展句)

Having viewed these aspects, and with many more TV programs produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. 10(總結(jié)句)