這個結(jié)尾的題目是討論輟學(xué)這一社會現(xiàn)象導(dǎo)致的問題和解決方案的。我們發(fā)現(xiàn)使用前面提到的條件狀語從句也可以作為這類題材結(jié)尾的重要句型。

二.觀點+展望:

第2種結(jié)尾的思路即將回顧全文部分省略,直接表達觀點和意圖。這種結(jié)尾方式比較適合于純單邊支持的作文,以下我們來看幾個例子:

It is obvious difficult to restrict the movement of people around the world and it is probably foolish to try to stop it. But attempts should be made to redress the imbalance.

關(guān)于人才流失的話題,作者在結(jié)尾一上來就表達了自己的立場,即無法阻止這個現(xiàn)象。但是進而又對改變這個狀況做了期待。我們來對比另外一個例子:

All in all, the problem of world poverty cannot be solved by money alone. Nations need to work together on long-term projects, sharing their knowledge and skills so that each person has something valuable to offer their community.

在分析解決型題材的結(jié)尾中也可以采用這種2要素的結(jié)尾方式,如果最后所剩時間不是很充分的前提下,省略對全文的回顧而直接表達觀點也是一種明智的決定。

To conclude, it is clear that although numbers of women in the workforce have increased, they are still disadvantaged because they generally put the welfare of others, particularly the family, above financial ambition or promotion.

上面例子中,我們發(fā)現(xiàn),其實展望未來這個部分,也可以寫成解釋原因,因為不是每個題目到最后都能想出一個合適的未來讓你展望的,那么這個時候我們不妨把思路切換成對觀點的原因解釋,也未嘗不是一個好主意。我們再來看看這個例子:

To sum up, the richer nations have helped a lot by providing money for poor countries and poorer countries need to not only spend the money for daily use, but also put more money on economic developments, human resource improvements and education advancements, because only by doing so can they change their poor situations.

以上是對2種高端結(jié)尾方式的探討,在下一章節(jié)中,專家將繼續(xù)介紹其他的結(jié)尾方式,敬請期待。