如何寫出精彩的雅思寫作結(jié)尾
雅思寫作中很多同學總是問,作文怎么練,結(jié)尾怎么寫才精彩?針對雅思寫作,說簡單只在三個方面提高即可:詞匯,句式,文意;針對這三個方面的系統(tǒng)持續(xù)練習,可在雅思寫作中有實質(zhì)性的提高。下面為大家詳細講解如何寫出精彩的雅思寫作結(jié)尾。
雅思例題及相關(guān)結(jié)尾:
V104 Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. Some people think that preventing these wild animals from dying out is a waste of resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
雅思考試結(jié)尾1:
Someone said safeguard of wild animals is a waste of resource, but I do not agree. It seems we would spend some time, wealth and manpower on this meaningless thing. Actually we also do this for human being ourselves. let’s protect wild animals right now.
如何讓你的雅思寫作結(jié)尾更閃亮評:結(jié)尾前一句話,是對于考官給出的觀點的轉(zhuǎn)述,要直接放在開篇。結(jié)尾應對全文觀點的總結(jié)。雅思大作文的結(jié)尾一定要有說服力,seems讓文章顯得說服力不足,meaningless跟全文觀點相孛。末尾一句有喊口號的意味,不符合英語議論文的習慣,同樣的意思可改換客觀平實的文風收尾。
雅思考試結(jié)尾2:
Certainly, our diet cannot be without meat. There are living stocks, which can provide us with sufficient and nutritious produce. Therefore, we need not to resort to wild animals, especially the endangered ones. To protect animals is to protect our living environment. Every individual should join efforts to keep the diversity of animals.
評:作者不僅會用否定句表達強調(diào),還很及時地采用了讓步式的收尾,指出,人當然要吃肉,但有眾多家畜,不必殺戮野生動物,尤其是瀕危的物種。讓步式結(jié)尾讓文章顯的客觀公正,符合英語議論文的要求和習慣,總體很有說服力。再加上語言上同樣成功,地道的措辭,如,living stocks, sufficient and nutritious, resort to (訴諸于),endangered ones, join efforts, diversity 是一篇8分作文的經(jīng)典結(jié)尾。
雅思結(jié)尾3:
To sum up, we can not live without wild animals due to their profound effects on us. For this reason, we should try our best to protect them. Let’s remember one thing---- protecting wild animals is equivalent to protecting ourselves.
評:雙重否定表示強調(diào),是英語議論文的常見手法,令結(jié)尾收的堅定有力。Profound effects深遠影響很好地呼應了文中提到過的野生動物保護的意義,令文章渾然一體。作者的觀點跟結(jié)尾1作者觀點完全一樣,但采用了平實的陳述口氣,并用了書面的地道詞匯,equivalent to ,是一個很不錯的結(jié)尾。
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