這個(gè)系列來自滬江部落“四六級作文訓(xùn)練營：改詞擴(kuò)句”，本節(jié)目適合備考英語四級和英語六級的朋友，以及有志于提高英語寫作水平的朋友，旨在幫助大家寫英文作文時(shí)，用語更加地道和規(guī)范。

今天繼續(xù)來學(xué)習(xí)如何通過改詞來提高作文水平，本期主講連詞的替換。

原句:

Although the development of science and technology has brought the process to mankind, our surrounding natural environment is greatly destroyed.

改句:

The development of science and technology has brought the process to mankind while our surrounding natural environment is greatly destroyed.

【解析】

原句是一句典型的轉(zhuǎn)折句，在四六級作文中，"although"和"though“的應(yīng)用相當(dāng)廣泛，那么如何使自己與眾不同呢，在此，我為大家推薦一個(gè)連詞”while“，這個(gè)單詞有很多意思，但在改句中，它的意思是”雖然、盡管“，在考場上用的人相對比較少，所以以后在作文中，如果出現(xiàn)了轉(zhuǎn)折、對比之類的關(guān)系句，記住要想到”while“哦！

下面大家來試試吧！

Existing employees have made concessions, such as higher retirement ages, but it is near impossible to reduce the payments made to existing pensioners.

答案：

While existing employees have made concessions, such as higher retirement ages, it is near impossible to reduce the payments made to existing pensioners.

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