這個(gè)系列來(lái)自滬江部落“四六級(jí)作文訓(xùn)練營(yíng)：改詞擴(kuò)句”，本節(jié)目適合備考英語(yǔ)四級(jí)和英語(yǔ)六級(jí)的朋友，以及有志于提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平的朋友，旨在幫助大家寫(xiě)英文作文時(shí)，用語(yǔ)更加地道和規(guī)范。

本期繼續(xù)我們的改詞擴(kuò)句，主講換詞和關(guān)系詞。。

原句：

They give us new information about the latest products. Some advertisements are very elegantly presented. And we are inspired or even moved by them. No matter it is an evil or an angel, advertisement has become an essential part of our modern life.

改句：

They provide us with up-to-date information about the latest products. Some advertisements are so elegantly presented that we are inspired or even moved. No matter it is an evil or an angel, advertisement has become an indispensable part of our modern life.

【解析】原句中有"give"這個(gè)常用詞，我們細(xì)想一下用一個(gè)比較高級(jí)的詞組"provide sb. with sth."來(lái)替換它，同理，我們把"new"換成"up-to-date"，把"essential"換成"indispensable"。

然后，再看原句中的連接詞"and"，我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn)And連接的前后句并不是并列關(guān)系，而是因果關(guān)系，所以我們可以用"so…that…"來(lái)連接兩個(gè)句子。

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President Bush said that medical science has given the power to some people to help save these young lives.

答案：President Bush said that medical science has provided some people with the power to help save these young lives.

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