If you don't want your email to get lost among the mountain of job pitches in a recruiter's inbox, perhaps you need to revise your strategy. Michael Junge, Google recruiter, gives a few pointers on writing the ideal introduction email.
如果你不想你的電子郵件淹沒在招聘官堆積如山的收件箱里，也許你就需要優(yōu)化你的策略了。谷歌招聘官Michael Junge對于如何寫好一份介紹郵件給出了幾點建議。

Be specific. Junge says he's more likely to click on an email that's specific versus one that's generic. It's helpful to make sure that even the subject line is specific to the purpose of an email, so the intention of the email is clear. "Instead of a generic subject line, I recommend something that references the specific job title," Junge says. For example, using a subject line like "Expert Project Manage For Position Number 428" will make the receiver more likely to open it versus a generic "Hi, Nice to Meet You."
要具體。Junge表示，比起那些說辭泛泛的郵件標題，他更喜歡去點擊具體的標題。在郵件的標題欄要寫清楚寫郵件的目的。Junge推薦說，“比起寬泛的郵件主題，我建議寫成與工作職位相關的具體名稱，比如‘申請職位編號428的專家項目’。收件人更愿意去打開這樣的郵件，而不是‘很高興認識你’這樣命名的郵件。”

Make it brief. Short and sweet is always the better route to take when you're writing emails, and a great introduction email is going to make a difference, according to Junge. "The idea of the email is mostly to get the person to click on the résumé," says the Google recruiter. A good email should say something like, "Hey my name is so and so, it's nice to meet you. I'm a project manager with 10 years of experience. Here are a couple of quick highlights of my background." Junge recommends to then add about two or three bullet points that are relevant to the particular position based on the information the applicants have about the job.
要簡短。寫郵件時，簡短、友好永遠是不會犯錯的原則。而在應征郵件中，一個好的個人介紹則會起到脫穎而出的效果。Junge表示，“寫郵件的目的往往是希望收件人能去查看簡歷。因此一份優(yōu)秀的郵件就該這么寫——‘我的名字是XX，很高興認識你。我有10年擔當項目經(jīng)理的經(jīng)驗。以下是我工作中的一些亮點和簡要背景介紹?！盝unge還建議加上兩三條與應聘職位相關的信息。