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本期作文題目：

You work in the Accounts Department and are responisble for checking employees' expenses. Write a 40-50 word memo to staff:

reminding them of the importance of receipts
telling them how expenses will be paid
saying how long expenses payments take to process.

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網(wǎng)友作文一：

to: all staff
from: miss Z.
subject: expense claim

dear sirs or madams[1],
please remember to claim your expenses to the company. we would like to collect the relevant receipts to reimburse. [2]as usually, [3] the expenses will be paid with cash or chque. and it may take one week at most for expenses payment to take to process.
yours,

_________________________________________
[1]去掉
[2]你讓誰(shuí)報(bào)銷？身份錯(cuò)了。And remember to keep the relevant receipt for us to check.
[3]As usual

網(wǎng)友作文二：

To: All staff
From: Jackey Cheng
Subject: Expenses

May I remind all staff that you need to enclose receipts when you claim all expenses? Claims will not be accepted without receipts. Expenses are paid by cash or cheque which you could choose within two weeks after you claimed them.
Thank you.

Good job!