2014年6月英語四級六級考試馬上就要來臨了,提到四六級作文,大家是不是已經背了不少模板呢?背會了模板固然很好,但是千萬不要忽略了最基本的詞匯的積累。如果缺乏相應的詞匯積累,有的考生可能連圖表(畫)作文上的英文注釋都看不懂,理解錯誤可能會導致文章寫跑題。更有甚者,寫出的只有模板,言之無物,也是寫作的大忌!

近兩年來,四級作文命題喜歡將時下熱點以漫畫或圖片的形式展現。尤其是互聯網,更成為話題的“寵兒”。假如給大家一幅漫畫,畫中兩人正在討論自己在微博上看過的東西,討論得特別開心,感覺彼此一見如故,相見恨晚。這樣一幅畫提煉出來的內容,同樣用老生常談的三段式可以解決,那就是:
1. 如今微博(microblog)越來越普及
2. 微博普及對于社會生活的影響
3. 我的觀點

下面就一起來看看,如何圍繞這一提綱展開文章,寫出內容詳實的高分作文!

一、引言段常用詞

首段可以先點出微博迅速流行的原因——隨著互聯網的發(fā)展和普及,微博進入了人們的生活。With the development and the popularity of the Internet, many newly-born terms such as microblog have found their ways into our everyday life. 在描述社會現象時,with the development and the popularity of… “隨著……的發(fā)展和普及”是最常用的表原因的詞匯。央視網CCTV.COM對微博現象也有報道,表達也同樣使用了with結構。

With the increasing numbers of smartphones and Chinese Internet users, micro blogging, known as Weibo in Chinese, has seen a surge.

See a surge指事物的突然發(fā)生和激增,考試時surge這樣難度的詞語考生可能想不到。這里使用sth. have/has found their way into our everyday life,既生動形象又地道地表達了“某種新興事物進入人們的生活”的意思。另外,想表達微博迅速流行還可以使用短語become a huge overnight sensation,或see an explosive growth給文章增色加分。

參考引言段:
With the development and the popularity of the Internet, many newly-born terms such as microblog have found their ways into our everyday life. Microblog has become a huge overnight sensation in China.

二、正文段常用詞

某種現象的流行或普及必然對社會或人們“產生巨大的影響”,所以在現象解釋類寫作中,一定要記住這個短語的表達——“產生巨大的影響”:exert a great/negative/huge influence/impact on,其中修飾語部分可以根據具體寫作內容靈活替換為表示“巨大的,負面的,意義重大的,積極的”等含義的詞語(great/negative/significant/active)。接下來,文章應該從幾個方面(firstly, secondly, thirdly, last but not least/moreover)闡述微博對社會產生的影響。

與傳統(tǒng)博客不同,微博集合了眾多輕量級元素如:至多140個字的文字信息,可附圖片、視頻或鏈接。

微博還是人們獲取實時消息的重要來源,借助互聯網,在微博上發(fā)布的任何消息人們都能在第一時間收到。

微博改變了信息傳遞的方式——普通人也可以成為重大事件的記錄者發(fā)布者。

人們在微博平臺上發(fā)表觀點,討論感興趣的話題。微博在人們溝通交流中起著重要作用。

以上可以看作是正文段中展開闡述的四點具體內容,涉及的一些難點詞匯如下:
發(fā)布信息:release information
交換信息:exchange information
圖片和視頻:images and videos
鏈接:links
實時消息:real-time news
第一時間:immediately/in seconds
親歷的,第一手的:first-hand
網民:netizen
信息傳遞:spread of information
信息來源:source of news/information
起著重要作用:play an important role in
成為:work as/act as

參考正文段:
The widespread use of microblog exerts a great influence on our daily life. Firstly, microblog allows users to share small elements of contents with friends or strangers, such as short sentences no more than 140 words, individual images, videos or links, which are totally different from those of traditional blog. Secondly, microblog has also emerged as an important source of real-time news, which reaches its audience in seconds. Thirdly, microblogging have revolutionized the way information is spread. By recording and releasing first-hand news, many ordinary netizens can act as sources of information, too. Last but not least, microblog offers a platform for people to discuss hot topics, share opinions and stay in touch, which plays an important role in communication with the public.

三、結尾段常用詞

最后一段要求闡明自己的觀點,表達觀點的常用語有as far as I'm concerned/as to me/to my thought, 表達“我同意,我認為”可以用這些短語in a word/I agree with that…/I am in favor of…。

參考結尾:
As far as I'm concerned, microblog provides a newly-emerged useful and convenient communication tool for people. I'm in complete agreement with the phrase "microblogging, flattering the world."

除了以上提到的各段常用表達外,滬江英語教研再給大家推薦一些現象解釋類寫作中的常用表達和詞匯:
accumulate precious experience:積累寶貴的經驗
seize opportunities:抓住機會
acquire happiness:獲得幸福
achieve success:取得成就
discard carelessly:隨意丟棄
absence/lack of consciousness of:缺乏……的意識
pose a great challenge/threat to:對……構成挑戰(zhàn)/威脅
provide a liberal and favorable environment:提供自由寬松的環(huán)境
pursuit of wealth and social status:追求財富和社會地位
at the expense of:以……為代價
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intense competition:激烈的競爭
academic cheating:學術作弊
eager for instant success and quick profits:急功近利
immediate benefits:短期利益
supervision system:監(jiān)管體系
scientific management:科學的管理
fair competition:公平的競爭
career promotion:職場晉升
personal relationship:人際關系
face-to-face communication:面對面的交流
physical fitness:身體健康
social network tools:社交工具
numerous information:海量信息

以上所列的詞匯,難免掛一漏萬。因此,還需要各位考生,多多揣摩真題范文,做好筆記,時時處處做個有心人,積少成多,筑起更豐富的、屬于自己的、獨一無二的作文素材積累!? ?

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