改錯Part ⅣError Correction (15 minutes)

Directions: This part consists of a short passage. In the passage there are altogether 10 mistakes, one in each numbered line. You may have to change a word, add a word or delete a word. If you change a word, cross it out and write the correct word in the corresponding blank. If you add a word, put an insertion　mark(∧)in the right place and write the missing word in the blank. If you delete a word, cross it out and put a slash(/)in the blank.

The place of the child in society has varied for thousands of years and has been effected by different cultures and religions. In ancient times unwanted children were occasionally abandoned, put to death, exploiting or offered for religious sacrifices, and in any event a large percentage of them didn’t survive their physically hazardous existence to reach to maturity.

In western civilization within the last few hundred years, there have been many changes in attitude with the young. In agricultural Europe, and later with the beginning of the Industrial Revolution, the children of the poor work long hours for little or no pay, and there was no public concern on their safety or welfare punishment could be brutal and severe.

By the eighteenth century the harsh and severe methods began to show any change. Society slowly accorded(給予) children a role of importance. Books were written expressly for them and gradually laws were passing for their protection. Efforts were made to create for them a life better than their parents!

In the past few decades parents have become more and more attentive for the needs of their children.Better health care is available and education is no longer reserving for the children from wealthy families.

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內(nèi)容概要:

幾千年來，孩子在社會的地位不盡相同，這主要是受不同文化和宗教的影響。在古代，不想要的孩子有時被拋棄，被處死，被剝削，甚至被用作宗教祭品。在近幾百年來，在西方對孩子態(tài)度有了很大的改變，但孩子們經(jīng)常長時間工作而得到很少或幾乎沒有報酬。直到最近，才有法律保護(hù)未成年人，使得他們有接受醫(yī)療和教育的機(jī)會。

71. 【參考答 案】effected→affected

【解題技巧】詞性錯誤。

【詳細(xì)解答】effect 是名詞，影響，而此處需要動詞，因此改作affect v.

72. 【參考答 案】exploiting→exploited

【解題技巧】語態(tài)錯誤。

【詳細(xì)解答】此處需要被動語態(tài)，因為孩子們是被剝削。?

73. 【參考答 案】to→ t

【解題技巧】及物動詞用法錯誤。

【詳細(xì)解答】reach 是及物動詞，后應(yīng)接賓語，而不需要介詞。?

74. 【參考答 案】with→toward

【解題技巧】介詞搭配錯誤。

【詳細(xì)解答】attitude 后接介詞toward。?

75. 【參考答 案】work→worked

【解題技巧】時態(tài)錯誤。

【詳細(xì)解答】此處應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時才符合全篇的安排。?

76. 【參考答 案】on→for

【解題技巧】介詞搭配錯誤。

【詳細(xì)解答】concern 后接for 表示“對…表示關(guān)注”?

77. 【參考答 案】any→some

【解題技巧】詞語用法錯誤。

【詳細(xì)解答】any只用于疑問句和否定句，而some 一般用于肯定句。?

78. 【參考答 案】passing→passed

【解題技巧】語態(tài)錯誤。

【詳細(xì)解答】此處需要被動語態(tài)，而不是主動語態(tài)。?

79. 【參考答 案】for→to

【解題技巧】介詞固定搭配。

【詳細(xì)解答】attentive 后接介詞to。?

80. 【參考答 案】reserving→reserved

【解題技巧】語態(tài)錯誤。

【詳細(xì)解答】此處需要被動語態(tài)。