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話題：

Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Elevation
Elevation means the height of something compared to other things. What does the elevation refer to?Is the elvation high or low? What effect does that have?
This week's topic: They checked the elevation... (90-110 words)

Suggestions:
1) water travels from high elevation to low elevation
2) studying the elevation of an area on a map
3) a better vantage point can be achieved from a higher elevation
4) oxygen may be needed when travelling to areas with higher elevation
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.

范例1：

On the other hand, video bugs were usually hidden in locations with higher elevation since a wider view would be advantageous. Some popular locations include light fixtures, corner of the ceiling, the edge of paintings hanging on the wall, among the books on a bookshelf, etc.. The only good location for video bugs at lower locations would pretty much be right on the desk in an office setting. The interior designer knew better than to touch anything on the club manager's desk, since the owner of the room could walk in at any moment.

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