托福綜合寫(xiě)作更多考察的是考生快速聽(tīng)記以及歸納信息的能力，如果我們能夠在閱讀文章部分和聽(tīng)聽(tīng)力部分對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)有準(zhǔn)確清晰的把握，那么之后在規(guī)定時(shí)間內(nèi)寫(xiě)出一篇思路清晰的高分小作文絕非難事。

作為滬江網(wǎng)校的托福老師，Yiy長(zhǎng)年專(zhuān)攻寫(xiě)作?？赡芤徽f(shuō)起寫(xiě)作大家就會(huì)對(duì)它產(chǎn)生偏見(jiàn)，（要我用非母語(yǔ)在20分鐘寫(xiě)出一篇380-400左右的作文一剛？！打字速度是致命傷，更何況還要思考怎么去發(fā)展它…）

然而事實(shí)是這樣的：只要你每周花一刻鐘的碎片時(shí)間跟著Yiyi老師針對(duì)每個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)提前進(jìn)行練習(xí)，你的戰(zhàn)斗力指數(shù)必定在短時(shí)間內(nèi)大幅度提高。信者得高分哦~~

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今天先送上綜合寫(xiě)作五步必殺技之記筆記。

我們先從看一篇科技方面的passage開(kāi)始，請(qǐng)大家閱讀的時(shí)候記得掐個(gè)表！（3分鐘哦）

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One of the most promising new developments in personal transportation is the smart car. A smart car is one that utilizes advanced methods of engineering or computers with some kinds of artificial intelligence. While smart cars have not yet reached their full potential, they are sure to be beneficial, to all who eventually drive them.

One advantage of smart cars is that they will help traffic flow faster. A smart car will be able to handle many of the driving duties, thereby allowing the people in the car to attend to other matters. Because the car, for the most part, will be driving itself, it will be able to select optimal routes based on their lack of vehicles and the speed with which they may be traveled upon. This, in turn, will make travel times much shorter and keep traffic moving continuously.

In addition, a smart car will have lower maintenance costs. Since the car will be almost entirely run by computers, the computers will be able to alert the owner when there is a minor problem to be fixed. The owner will then be able to fix the car at a low cost as opposed to waiting for the problem to develop into a major issue that would require an inordinate amount of money to be sent.

Time's up! 現(xiàn)在到時(shí)間展示你超凡的信息歸納能力啦！

STEP 1 速（kuáng）讀（sǎo）+歸（jīng）納（jiǎn）閱讀文章

三段式行文還是延續(xù)了總起段落+分段落1+分段落2的形式，于是結(jié)果來(lái)啦：

第一段作者提出了他的看法：Smart Cars – Promising New Developments

智能汽車(chē)實(shí)在好啊?。?！

（那你猜猜看接下來(lái)的內(nèi)容？肯定就是具體講smart cars到底哪里好到爆了對(duì)吧？沒(méi)錯(cuò)！）

第二段作者馬上提出分論點(diǎn)一：SC will help traffic flow faster. 之后的內(nèi)容就是在demonstrate這個(gè)論點(diǎn)。

第三段緊接著提出分論點(diǎn)二：SC will have lower maintenance costs. 之后的blah-bla-blah也不過(guò)就在闡明該論點(diǎn)。

那么問(wèn)題來(lái)了，我們是不是找到這些point就ok了呢？答案是：我們還需要往下挖掘一丟丟呢~ 看看下面的spots你有本事fill in嘛？（掐個(gè)表啦 2mins）

Smart Cars – Promising New Developments

SUB-OPINION1： SC will help .

l Handle many of the driving duties à drivers can attend to other matters

l Can choose à much shorter travel times & continuously moving traffic

SUB-OPINION2: SC have lower .

l Computers will alert owner when is

l Can fix problem before it becomes major issue

是不是瞬間覺(jué)得思路清晰了？做到這一步的你已經(jīng)成功梳理出了閱讀文章的脈絡(luò)。點(diǎn)個(gè)贊！當(dāng)然，我們現(xiàn)在做的事情在考場(chǎng)中你可以用速記的形式列出這些大小論點(diǎn)，沒(méi)有必要這么詳細(xì)，但切記要準(zhǔn)、狠、穩(wěn)！

以下是表的答案：

Traffic flow; optimal routes; maintenance costs; minor problem

進(jìn)入綜合寫(xiě)作的第二部分你將會(huì)聽(tīng)一個(gè)演講者就passage里面的內(nèi)容發(fā)表他的看法。據(jù)不完全統(tǒng)計(jì)，他一定是和passage的作者對(duì)著干的。。在這個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)，原本的passage會(huì)duang地消失一下下，你要磨耗鉛筆拿穩(wěn)草稿紙，因?yàn)榻酉聛?lái)要聽(tīng)聽(tīng)力啦.

時(shí)間再一次無(wú)情的到啦~ 誒喲，閱讀passage又出現(xiàn)啦

STEP 2 速（kuáng）讀（sǎo）+歸（jīng）納（jiǎn）聽(tīng)力文章

演講者肯定是被派來(lái)來(lái)吐槽智能汽車(chē)哪里哪里不靈光的，我們來(lái)分析分析他的觀點(diǎn)。

他讓我們不要高興得太早一剛。。因?yàn)?strong>SC won't be as breathtaking as everyone anticipates. 為啥呢？

首先，SC 的大規(guī)模制造將會(huì)使得汽車(chē)基數(shù)成幾何倍增長(zhǎng)，這個(gè)就是

SUB-OPINION 1--More automobiles mean a much heavier traffic condition.（這是Yiyi用自己的話歸納的，大家在考試時(shí)也要學(xué)會(huì)理解演講者的觀點(diǎn)把它概括出來(lái)。）

注意：即使你剛才不小心放空了沒(méi)有catch到首段的分論點(diǎn)，我們大可利用闡述分論點(diǎn)的部分來(lái)猜測(cè)他究竟剛剛在說(shuō)啥。比如，分論點(diǎn)一過(guò)后，演講者說(shuō)“僅僅因?yàn)樗鼈兪侵悄苘?chē)你就認(rèn)為自己可以擺脫交通大果醬嘛？” 哈哈哈，愚蠢的人類(lèi)！大家動(dòng)腦筋猜一下，演講者是不是之前一直在說(shuō)SC不能改變交通擁堵的現(xiàn)狀呢？（是正常人都會(huì)是這個(gè)邏輯。。）

接著回憶一下SUB-OPINION 2：SC are not cheap to maintain. 就像Tesla這樣的電動(dòng)汽車(chē)雖然環(huán)保但是大環(huán)境并沒(méi)有很好地在國(guó)內(nèi)支持它的體驗(yàn)。這一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)演講者提得非常直白，大家應(yīng)該很好找到。
好啦，接下來(lái)等著大家的同樣是一個(gè)很有心機(jī)的表

Smart Cars – Not as Breathtaking as People Anticipate

SUB-OPINION 1: SC will not ease traffic.

l Automobile technology improves à

l People will have to sit in

SUB-OPINION 2: SC will not be cheap to maintain.

l Use of very expensive,

l Replacing parts à

應(yīng)該沒(méi)有難道大家吧？Yiyi來(lái)揭曉一下答案啦：

Amount of traffic; longer traffic jams; custom-made parts; astronomical amount of money

總結(jié)陳詞時(shí)間！

當(dāng)你在填寫(xiě)以上兩張表格的時(shí)候其實(shí)就是在記筆記（是不是覺(jué)得頓時(shí)弱爆啦），你所記錄的是閱讀文章和聽(tīng)力文章的論點(diǎn)（注意：由于我們可以提前設(shè)想他們互相反駁彼此，所以在讀完閱讀文章后可以對(duì)于接下來(lái)的聽(tīng)力內(nèi)容做一個(gè)可行性猜測(cè)，你懂的 ）

希望各位考生在消化了Yiyi的話之后打開(kāi)WORD程序騰出雙手開(kāi)始碼字，Yiyi會(huì)先保留具體行文時(shí)候的訣竅（不然下次課講啥。。）

大家回去以后要記得鞏固Yiyi說(shuō)的知識(shí)點(diǎn)哦最好的辦法就是演練一篇文章！

下面這篇文章大家可以試著記一下筆記，這是一篇關(guān)于環(huán)境話題的閱讀文章，切記要掐個(gè)表！3mins~

Many environmentalists are wary of allowing the introduction of new species into an ecosystem. Ecosystems are fragile, and invasive species can often cause many problems when they are introduced where they do not belong. In fact, when they invade a new ecosystem, they often have several harmful effects.

For one, the introduction of new species can ruin the local ecosystem in many ways. First, it can act as a predator and eat other local species, thereby causing their their extinction. Another way is that it can consume too much of a valuable local food source. This consumption can cause other animals not to be able to eat as much as they are accustomed to. The result may be a decrease in the number of native species.

Another way that non-native species can be harmful is by causing the people who live in that area to suffer from financial losses. An example of this is the mesquite tree in the American Southwest. It thrives in areas with little water. However, because it soaks up the water from the ground, nearby grasses do not get enough and die. This causes local ranchers to lose money since they have to pay extra for animal feed. Also, the mesquite tree regenerates easily, so farmers must pay large amounts of money to remove the trees from their land.

FYI: 自控力差的同學(xué)可以嘗試在家里練習(xí)時(shí)戴上一副高大上的耳麥模仿考場(chǎng)的環(huán)境，Yiyi個(gè)人偏愛(ài)在寫(xiě)作時(shí)仍舊戴著耳機(jī)（隆隆的敲擊鍵盤(pán)聲就會(huì)瞬間小很多哦，另外也更容易讓自己專(zhuān)注）好啦，我們下周不見(jiàn)不散哦~

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