恩波2009年12月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文范文16篇
（四）Craze for Civil Service Examinations
1. 現(xiàn)在有越來(lái)越多的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員
2. 引起此現(xiàn)象的原因
3. 你的看法
● 審題概述●
本文是一篇主要論述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員增多的原因和對(duì)此看法的文章。第一段，主要綜述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員增多的現(xiàn)象。第二段，側(cè)重分析引起此現(xiàn)象的原因。第三段，重點(diǎn)談你對(duì)此的觀點(diǎn)。
【范文】
????? Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.
????? In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.
????? Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：第一句總述人們蜂擁參加公務(wù)員招考，第二句點(diǎn)明大學(xué)生是其中的主力軍，第三句再述熱衷于公務(wù)員報(bào)考的大學(xué)生不僅有文科的，還有理工科的。
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：
liberal arts majors文科專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：先總述引起大學(xué)生熱衷報(bào)考公務(wù)員的兩點(diǎn)因素，再詳細(xì)分述。
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：
（1）On the one hand…On the other起到銜接上文作用
（2）is attributable to歸因于
（3）sluggish world economy衰退的世界經(jīng)濟(jì)
◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：重點(diǎn)談對(duì)大學(xué)生熱衷報(bào)考公務(wù)員的觀點(diǎn)。
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：beyond reproach無(wú)可厚非
（五）Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?
1. 現(xiàn)在社會(huì)上有各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班
2. 有些人認(rèn)為有必要參加課外培訓(xùn)班，有些人則認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要
3. 你的觀點(diǎn)
● 審題概述●
這是一篇主要論述人們和你對(duì)社會(huì)上各類(lèi)培訓(xùn)班看法的文章。第一段，概述各種各樣培訓(xùn)班的狀況。第二段，論述人們對(duì)參加課外培訓(xùn)班的不同看法。第三段，重點(diǎn)闡述你對(duì)此的看法。
【范文】
??? All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming, in which special training is provided concerning computer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialties like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.
??? Some consider it advisable to attend such classes while others believe it unnecessary. The former argues that it’s far more effective to command these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in school, hence, more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than get knowledge into our head.
??? As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：第一句綜述社會(huì)上提供知識(shí)、技能服務(wù)的各類(lèi)培訓(xùn)班雨后春筍般興起，第二句例舉語(yǔ)言速成課程特別火爆。
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：
（1）a great diversity of各種各樣的
（2）mushrooming迅速擴(kuò)散、增加
（3）language crash courses語(yǔ)言速成課程
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：先用一句對(duì)比式地?cái)[出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，再分別詳述他們的看法。
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：注意連接詞語(yǔ)while，The former，They，The latter group of people等的使用，強(qiáng)化了上下文之間的連貫性。
◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：辯證地論述你對(duì)參加各類(lèi)培訓(xùn)班的看法。
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：
（1）as far as I am concerned我認(rèn)為，就我而言
（2）counter-productive適得其反的、事與愿違的
（六）University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
1. 現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生都追求穿名牌，用名牌
2. 你對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的看法
● 審題概述●
這是一篇論述對(duì)大學(xué)生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第一段，詳述大學(xué)生熱衷追求、使用名牌的情形以及人們的看法。第二段，重點(diǎn)談你對(duì)此的看法。
【范文】
??? “What perfumes are you wearing?” “Aren’t your shoes Nike’s latest release?” “I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.” “I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along?” Don’t feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. It’s quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about the brands they like and the products they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students’ favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. “Keeping up with the Joneses” is their conviction – “If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?”
???? About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. They’ll probably take it to be a reflection of the students’ vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.
???? However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products. As such, they are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable. “The love of beauty is common to all,” goes the proverb; therefore, there’s nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isn’t it?
◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：本段分為兩個(gè)部分，即詳細(xì)陳述大學(xué)生追求和使用名牌的情況，以及人們對(duì)此的看法。
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：
（1）keeping up with the Joneses要在地位和物質(zhì)上比得上周?chē)娜?br>（2）conviction堅(jiān)定的信仰、看法
（3）vanity and superficiality虛榮心和面子觀（膚淺、表面、淺?。?/p>
◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：本段應(yīng)辯證地分析大學(xué)生追求、使用名牌的現(xiàn)象，既有對(duì)此肯定的看法，也有否定的看法，即大學(xué)生在追求和使用名牌中汲取經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)并學(xué)會(huì)管理。
◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：
（1）abide by the consequences自食其果
（2）ill-advised考慮不周的、不明智的
（3）in moderation適度、不過(guò)分
