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在滬江關注考研的滬友silence19834遇到了一個關于的疑惑，已有1人提出了自己的看法。

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1.a beautiful coastal city of Shandong province一般 用a beautiful coastal city in Shandong province 2.I achieved my bachelor degrees 改為bachelor degree 3. I have learned a lot in these five years 改為during these five years 4. I gained the scholarship for three times.改為I won the scholarship three times 5.Besides the courses learned in the university去掉the 6.As for my English, CET-6. Obviously it still need improving with my greater endeavor. 改為Though I have passed CET-6， my English still need to be improved with greater endeavor. 純屬個人意見

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