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?It is frequently observed that many people keep looking down at their mobile phones whatever they are doing. It is true that mobile phones have brought great convenience to us as we can send short messages, check e-mails, surf the Internet, or watch videos almost anywhere. However, the overuse of mobile phones also leads to some serious problems.

The over-dependence on mobile phones can harm the relationship among friends and family. With mobile phones, people do not talk as much as before. For example, sometimes at dinner tables, instead of chatting and laughing with each other, many people choose to chat with other friends online. In other words, mobile phones help people contacting friends far away more easily at the expense of reducing the communication with those who are sitting right next to them.

In conclusion, mobile phone can be a useful tool in modern life, but overusing it damages interpersonal relationship. There is no point to lose our intimacy with friends and family to modern technology.

點(diǎn)評(píng):

本題漫畫探討手機(jī)的廣泛使用對(duì)人們生活的影響。話題貼近日常生活,難度中等。題目要求簡(jiǎn)述手機(jī)在人們生活中越來(lái)越重要的角色,并解釋過(guò)度使用手機(jī)可能帶來(lái)的后果。

考生主要可以從以下幾個(gè)角度思考:

1. 對(duì)健康的危害;

2. 對(duì)人際關(guān)系的負(fù)面影響;

3. 對(duì)個(gè)人學(xué)習(xí)、發(fā)展的阻礙。

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