托福寫(xiě)作有時(shí)很容易：20分鐘可以學(xué)會(huì)三種句型的運(yùn)用。托福寫(xiě)作有時(shí)也很難，難點(diǎn)在于怎樣用地道英文表達(dá)?本文帶你走進(jìn)地道英語(yǔ)的世界，一起來(lái)看如何寫(xiě)出地道的托福英語(yǔ)。

句子：

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

改進(jìn)：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.

改進(jìn): Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

改進(jìn)：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

改進(jìn): We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

改進(jìn): He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.

改進(jìn): They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

改進(jìn): Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

改進(jìn): They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

改進(jìn): It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

改進(jìn): Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

以上是考生們?cè)?a target="_blank">托福寫(xiě)作中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)經(jīng)過(guò)修改后的地道英語(yǔ)的對(duì)比，從中找出不同來(lái)知道地道英語(yǔ)到底怎么寫(xiě)的，從而運(yùn)用到托福寫(xiě)作中。