四、培養(yǎng)途徑

　　1.根據(jù)老師布置的寫作內(nèi)容，獨立完成一篇寫作。

　　2.與同伴合作，交流自己的寫作，通過交流找出各自作文中寫得好的地方和優(yōu)美的句子，合作創(chuàng)造一篇新的文章，供大家欣賞。

　　3.找老師點評，請求老師指點，尤其是怎樣潤色。

　　4.自己糾錯，寫下反思。

五、備考演練

????? A

　　縉云山是重慶著名的游覽勝地，每天有大量的游客。請你根據(jù)下面提供的信息寫一篇報道，說明現(xiàn)在的游客在環(huán)境保護方面的變化。

　　寫作要求：

　　1.詞數(shù)在100左右。

　　2.條理清楚，語句通順。

　　3.開頭已寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

　　Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

　　B

　　閱讀電視廣告詞：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根據(jù)提示，寫一篇60-80詞的短文。

　　提示：

　　1.生活離不開水。

　　2.可飲用水在減少。

　　3.水污染嚴重。

　　4.應保護水源，再利用水。

　　思路點撥與參考答案

　　A. [思路點撥]：

　?、傥捏w：記敘文。

　?、跁r態(tài)：一般過去時態(tài)，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。采用正反對比的寫作手法，增加感染力。

　?、蹖懽髂康模焊嬖V讀者保護環(huán)境的重要性。

　　Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

　　B. [思路點撥]：

　?、賷A敘夾議(說明現(xiàn)狀，談談感想)。

　?、跁r態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。

　?、蹚V告詞的含義——水很重要，應保護和再利用(寫作意圖)。

　　Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.