題目：Choices After Graduation

寫作要求

According to a survey, there are three main choices for college students after graduation:

?nding a job, pursuing further study by taking the postgraduate entrance exam or going abroad, and the other miscellaneous options. And the percentages for each choice is 50%, 47% and 3%. What are the possible reasons behind it? And what’s your suggestion for graduate students to make the choice?

Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Choices after Graduation

You are to write in three parts.

In the ? rst part, state speci? cally what your idea is.

In the second part, provide reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to?follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

審題思路

本題是一道現(xiàn)象解釋說(shuō) 明/結(jié)果預(yù)測(cè)型的題目，要求分析為什么大學(xué)生畢業(yè)后只有一

半人去找工作，其他人選擇去考研、出國(guó)留學(xué)或者其他，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章可以從以下方面著手 ：

1. 從原因方面來(lái)說(shuō) ：可以分述這些選項(xiàng)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn) ，但重點(diǎn)應(yīng)該放在就業(yè)困難 、考研和出國(guó)留學(xué)的優(yōu)勢(shì)上，至于其他選項(xiàng)，可以忽略 ；

2. 從個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)來(lái)說(shuō) ：可以建議畢業(yè)生考慮個(gè)人的經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況 、學(xué)習(xí)興趣和適應(yīng)能力等來(lái)選擇 ，而不要盲目地跟隨別人來(lái)做選擇 。

范文賞析

Choices After Graduation

A recent survey shows that only half of the graduate students will choose to find a job while 47% of them (an increasing percentage) , will pursue further study . This change has brought the issue? into focus and made it more prominent. From my perspective, the following factors can account for the choices of graduates.

引言部分 ：作者先對(duì)題干內(nèi)容做了一個(gè)概述，并用from my perspective引出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

First and foremost, with the enrollment extension of universities, college graduates are facing the severe employment situation, which forces them to ?nd another way out. And staying in universities, at home or abroad, could help them out for the time being. Besides, in today’s information age, knowledge is updated very rapidly. Many college students find that their knowledge is not enough for their future career. Therefore, further study becomes their ?rst choice. Last but not least, some college students would not like to enter the complicated society and want to escape from the reality temporarily by going to further study.

主體部分 ：作者列舉了三個(gè)原因——就業(yè)形勢(shì)嚴(yán)峻、知識(shí)更新快和逃避現(xiàn)實(shí)—— 來(lái)說(shuō)明為什么越來(lái)越多的畢業(yè)生選擇考研或者出國(guó)留學(xué)，并分別使用了first and foremost，besides和last but not least來(lái)銜接。

From my point of view, one’s choice after graduation should be based on his individual condition. Though taking the postgraduate entrance exam or going abroad for further study is a good choice, it is not necessarily true of everyone, because it might involve many factors, such as the future career direction and economic condition. Therefore, we should take a full account before we make our decisions.

總結(jié)部分 ：在說(shuō)明原因的基礎(chǔ) ，作者用from my point of view 再次引入自己的觀點(diǎn)，說(shuō)明畢業(yè)生應(yīng)根據(jù)自身情況來(lái)做出選擇。

亮點(diǎn)回放

1. pursue further study: “進(jìn)行深造”；此處也可以將further用作動(dòng)詞 ，改成further their study來(lái)表示同樣的意思。另外pursue也常用其名詞形式pursuit ，常用搭配為in pursuit of。

2. bring ... into focus: “使 ……成為關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)”。

3. prominent: “顯著的，突出的” ；此處近義詞為visible ，noticeable ，obvious。

ment: “登記 ，注冊(cè)” ；這里的enrollment extension是指? “擴(kuò)大招生”。

5. way out:“出路 ，擺脫 困境 的辦法” ；此處還可以用solution來(lái)代替 。

6. for the time being:“暫時(shí)” ；與下文的temporarily是近義詞 。

7. update:“更新 、升級(jí)” ；也可以用renew來(lái)替代 。

8. complicated: “錯(cuò)綜復(fù)雜的，艱深的”。

9. be true of: “適用于 ，符合于”。

10. take a full account : “充分考慮”；近義詞為consider fully/ carefully，take a full consideration等。